Some people think that strict punishments for driving offences are the key to reducing traffic accidents. Others, however, believe that other measures would be more effective in improving road safety.

Nowadays,
car
users increase day by day while, increases the probability of traffic accidents. The
government
should be some restrictions on road
safety
.
However
,
car
companies have a compulsion in
this
case
such
as
safety
belts and other
safety
options. I believe that
car
safety
is the main stone of
this
case. So,
government
encourage
car
company for
car
safety
such
as
,
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researching and developing new options. Volvo is a good example
for
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this
situation.
Safety
is the
first
opportunity of Volvo and people can see many safeties equipment in different
car
models which is discovered by Volvo. Innovations in 3-point seat belts and new types of airbags are some of them. Some people believe that strict punishments are a good way to prevent road accidents.
This
view is partially true, but a new problem arises,
for example
, drivers complain of unnecessary stress, so
this
problem leads to a traffic accident. I think that people should feel more comfortable when driving a
car
and
the
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same time be very careful with other drivers.
Also
, all drivers should take an exam about psychology by the
government
which must be before the driver's license. Because it is more important than
driver's
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license. In summary, road
safety
is a complex problem
however
, the
government
should be invested
to
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a
car
company for the innovation about
car
safety
.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • deterrent
  • repeat offenses
  • infrastructure improvements
  • public awareness campaigns
  • reckless driving
  • traffic management technologies
  • intelligent traffic lights
  • speed cameras
  • public transportation
  • minimize
  • enhance safety
  • allocate funds
  • road signs
  • road safety
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