You work for an international company and would like to spend six months working in its head office in another company Write a letter to your manager. In your letter: - Explain why you want to work in the company’s head office for six months - Say how your work could be done while you are away - Ask for his/her help in arranging it

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Dear Mr John, I am writing
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letter
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to express my interest in attending the
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months
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training program planned at our head office in California from
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month. The training is for
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months
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on artificial intelligence and machine learning with hands-on project development. I got an invitation
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for the training from our head office in California. I am really excited about it as
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training will benefit the Automatic Tune Engine project planned for
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year. Since
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training is for
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months
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, I assure you that our quarterly deliverable will not get impacted in my absence. I do understand that we are short on resources, to address the same I propose using resources from our offshore team for the
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six
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until deployment. I will ensure that knowledge transfer would be done on time and the team would be self-sufficient before I leave for my training. To leave my current post and move to work at the headquarter for the upcoming time, I am requested to get a recommendation
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from my manager, so I am grateful if you would issue me
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letter
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. I am looking forward to your kind response. Best regards, Adam
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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