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the teenage
ages
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norm in some cultures, Correct article usage
the
while
it is not acceptable for others. Linking Words
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involving
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being involved
deduced
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has
conductive
consequences for youngsters. Use the right word
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, by being part of society from an early age, we are being trained to efficiently struggle with the drawbacks of our future careers. Linking Words
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, striving to make a balance between our occupation's commitments and our education forces us to be aware of the importance of time Linking Words
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which
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also
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interest
and fostering our skills. Fix the agreement mistake
interests
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, my father found his passion in cooking and Linking Words
follow
it to become a well-known chef after spending one summer doing the dishes in a kitchen.
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educating
might be preferable for parents to spending time earning pocket money. Two reasons Wrong verb form
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exist
this
attitude. Linking Words
First,
the role of education in having a favoured career is out of the question. In some Linking Words
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students
do not have enough free time to focus on other activities. Punctuation problem
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for entering
universities, you need to pass an entrance exam Change preposition
to enter
which
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Secondly
, teenagers are at a greater risk of being exploited, Linking Words
hence
parents believe Linking Words
by
letting their children work in a not Correct word choice
that by
familiar
environment, they are not only putting them in Use the right word
unfamiliar
a
danger but Correct article usage
apply
also
taking Linking Words
their
chance to succeed.
I am not completely in agreement with the above-said view, because it suffers from the disadvantage that puts students in a way which Change preposition
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ended
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leads
in being graduated
from fields that they are not really interested in, like medicine.
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to graduation
To sum up
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nevertheless
there are undoubtedly some difficulties with working from an early age, it has brought the countries Linking Words
where
have been persuading their children to do Correct word choice
that
such
a thing, more enthusiastic and happier workers. I agree that providing a safe working environment for teens can help societies to glow.Linking Words