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In many countries, old or traditional languages are dying out or being forgotten, especially by younger people. Is this an acceptable development which occurs inevitably, or is it something which we should try to prevent?

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In many areas around the world, keeping traditional things like ancient
languages
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 which we don’t use commonly nowadays is becoming more difficult, specifically among
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youngsters. The idea provokes strong arguments, which I will consider here. In
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 modern lifestyle, we
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 to move forward and learn other
languages
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as well as
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 we can.
While
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 the world is globalizing more and more, speaking in only one
language
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 appears not enough to live and work successfully.
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,
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 society requires us to speak in several
languages
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 like English,
China
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Chinese
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,
Korea
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Korean
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, etc except our original
language
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.
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, why do youth need to spend their time learning an ancient
language
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,
instead
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 of exploring another culture through their
language
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?
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, there is not enough usage of old
languages
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. So, it makes it more difficult for us to not forget our old
languages
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.
On the other hand
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, it appears that the old
language
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 and
history
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 belong to each other, which means in some way, old
languages
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 represent the part of
history
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. By
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, we mean that denying our ancient
language
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 seems like ignoring our own
history
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. For that reason, remembering and using our traditional
language
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 will help us to keep retrieving the
history
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 of our countries.
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, there is a phrase in Mongolia,
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says that “ We are complete when we have our
language
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, border of the
country
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, and cattle”. So, respecting our traditional
language
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 is a kind of immune system of our
country
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. If people don’t know about their own
country
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’s historical
language
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, no one will care about it and it will disappear with some traditional rituals
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.
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, I consider, as the future of the
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, For the young generation, it is crucial to know the traditional
languages
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 well. Because of the historical bond with
language
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 and independence of the
country
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 contingent on the ancient
language
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 in some way.
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A strong argument essay structure can be split up into 4 paragraphs, each containing 4 sentences (except the conclusion paragraph, which only contains 3 sentences).

Stick to this essay structure:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion

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