Many old buildings are protected by law because they are part of a nation's history. However, some people think old buildings should be knocked down to make way for new ones because people need houses and offices. How important is it to maintain old buildings? Should history stand in the way of progress?

History

has passed for a long time ago but numerous old

buildings

after the war still are protected and conserved carefully by the government.

However

, some people think that we should not keep the

buildings

because they take up too

much

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places for houses and offices.

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of maintaining old

buildings

and

history

does not bother to the progress.

Firstly

, historic

buildings

play a significant role in our lives. They

represents

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our cultures, traditions, races and are

evidences

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for

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heroic pasts.

Secondly

, old

buildings

attract tons of tourists per year for the nations.

This

increases the popularity of the country and

also

contributes a large sum

of

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the nation’s economy.

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, France's tourism donates more than 90 billion euro to the economy of the country,

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France become the 7th developed nation

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the world.

Moreover

, keeping old

buildings

help young generations improve their

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knowledge

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about

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history

.

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generations

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have to

knows

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few

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informations

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of

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the country like how did we

got

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through wars? Why are the

buildings

here? The origin of the

buildings

?

On the other hand

,

history

should not be a barrier

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the nation’s progress. The

first

reason is the government are trying to preserve and protect historical sites as much as they can. They even show it as

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proof of their

proudful

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past.

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Furthermore

,

history

also

has been brought

in

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education, which means it helps

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informations

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about the war periods of

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generations for young people. In conclusion, historic

buldings

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buildings

have a crucial role in both past and present. The government should never let

history

stand in the way of progress.