Many old buildings are protected by law because they are part of a nation's history. However, some people think old buildings should be knocked down to make way for new ones because people need houses and offices. How important is it to maintain old buildings? Should history stand in the way of progress?

History
has passed for a long time ago but numerous old
buildings
after the war still are protected and conserved carefully by the government.
However
, some people think that we should not keep the
buildings
because they take up too
much
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places for houses and offices.
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importances
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of maintaining old
buildings
and
history
does not bother to the progress.
Firstly
, historic
buildings
play a significant role in our lives. They
represents
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our cultures, traditions, races and are
evidences
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for
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the
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heroic pasts.
Secondly
, old
buildings
attract tons of tourists per year for the nations.
This
increases the popularity of the country and
also
contributes a large sum
of
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the nation’s economy.
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, France's tourism donates more than 90 billion euro to the economy of the country,
makes
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France become the 7th developed nation
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the world.
Moreover
, keeping old
buildings
help young generations improve their
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knowledge
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about
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the
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history
.
Every
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generations
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have to
knows
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few
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a few
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informations
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of
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the country like how did we
got
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through wars? Why are the
buildings
here? The origin of the
buildings
?
On the other hand
,
history
should not be a barrier
of
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the nation’s progress. The
first
reason is the government are trying to preserve and protect historical sites as much as they can. They even show it as
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proof of their
proudful
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past.
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Furthermore
,
history
also
has been brought
in
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education, which means it helps
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informations
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about the war periods of
last
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generations for young people. In conclusion, historic
buldings
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buildings
have a crucial role in both past and present. The government should never let
history
stand in the way of progress.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Heritage conservation
  • Cultural landmarks
  • Architectural integrity
  • Sustainable development
  • Urban regeneration
  • Historic edifice
  • Adaptive reuse
  • Urban sprawl
  • Civic pride
  • Cultural identity
  • Aesthetic value
  • Preservation vs. Progress debate
  • Innovative restoration
  • Community engagement
  • Economic revitalization
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