Learning English at school is often seen as more important than learning local languages. if these are not taught, many are at risk of dying out. in your opinion, is it important for everyone to learn English? Should we try to ensure the survival of local languages and if so, how?

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as
english
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language
is most
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commonly
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word
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.
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supporting points in subsequent paragraphs.
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a vital role to share emotions and thoughts
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other
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person
. It is very important for
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to convey their message in a way to make
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person
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understand
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easily
,
thus
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common
used
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helps to resolve the problems of communication barriers .
English
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conversation, resultantly individuals face
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hurdles while talking to
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in any country .
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, international students face
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issues to
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their message to
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person
with the help of
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language
as it is world
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widely
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them self
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more comfortable in
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environment. Moving
further
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is
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preferred
eveywhere
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everywhere
then
the chances of
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segregation
would be reduced on the basis of
languages
in each field
such
as in jobs, and in admission for students in
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academics
academic
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grounds and
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of discrimination would be decreased with the acceptance of
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in each and every country .
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, people will become more confident to share their views with each other without
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hesitation
.
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, many individuals
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prefer
to hide their emotions and communicate less with
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outsiders
with a common reason of having different
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between them.
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friends and become less social due to
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. To conclude, it is preferable to have
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common
language
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socialised
person
and have a clear conversation with other people .
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  • global communication
  • economic opportunities
  • cultural diversity
  • endangered
  • linguistic heritage
  • inclusive
  • multilingualism
  • language revitalization
  • language policy
  • language preservation
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