Several languages are in danger of extinction because they are spoken by tiny numbers of people. Some people say that governments should spend public money on saving these languages, while others believe that would be a waste of money. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
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community
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the community
further
, mainly due to their minimum use . To prevent this
, most people
suggest spending state finance while some are against this
. Since some of these languages
are very old and saving of languages
like earth heritages should be a top priority of each government around the world
. Due to ,this
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government should save these Correct your spelling
believing
languages
.
With the speed of globalisation , most
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the most
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communities
world
try to use global languages
like English to communicate with the world
. with the movement of people
towards the city as well as reducing the population growth in rural areas , people
who use this
languagelanguages
become less and less. Correct your spelling
language languages
as a result
of this
, some of the old languages
are on the cleft of extinction from the world
. Most governments spend millions of money
to slow down this
process by teaching this
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these
languagelanguages
to children. Correct your spelling
language languages
For example
in New Zealand's, most schools teach their Own languages
other than English to their students . Since this
is a good trend to save these languages
for future generations , I think it is a good trend.
Although
most people
think like this
some think the oposite
of Correct your spelling
opposite
this
. Since some languages
are already existed
and the Change to the active voice
already exist
have already existed
goverment
has lord of other things to do for the country , they think it is a waste of Correct your spelling
government
money
. But, since some languages
are symbols of their nationality and they are very valuable , they must be saved.
In conclusion , most languages
around the world
are about to extinction and most believe the goverment
should save them. Correct your spelling
government
although
some people
believe as a waste of money
,
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languages
are world
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
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- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
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- however
- although
- even though
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