Several languages are in danger of extinction because they are spoken by tiny numbers of people. Some people say that governments should spend public money on saving these languages, while others believe that would be a waste of money. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

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government should save these
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try to use global
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towards the city as well as reducing the population growth in rural areas ,
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are on the cleft of extinction from the
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. Most governments spend millions of
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language languages
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in New Zealand's, most schools teach their Own
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for future generations , I think it is a good trend.
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and the
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has lord of other things to do for the country , they think it is a waste of
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. But, since some
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are symbols of their nationality and they are very valuable , they must be saved. In conclusion , most
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are about to extinction and most believe the
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believe as a waste of
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since most of these old
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heritage I believe we must spend
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to save them.
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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