In many countries today there are many highly qualified graduates without employment. What factors may have caused this situation and what, in your opinion, can/should be done about it?

These days , many highly skilled people find it difficult to get a job ,especially in economically developing countries .

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issue has several certain causes , there are several approaches that should be taken in order to address

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problem . On the one hand , there are multiple reasons that lead to

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phenomenon .

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, the overpopulation in developing countries remains the main reason for

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issue because the population of the poor nations rise and

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the number of job-seekers increases significantly and the number of educated persons without employment increases .

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, the economic crisis that happens in many countries reduces the growth of multiple companies and

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decreases the demand for job positions .

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, there are several practical approaches that should be taken into consideration in order to address

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issue . The authority may provide many grants for graduates in order to start their businesses.

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, the doctors could open their own clinics rather than waiting to work in a hospital and the engineers could set up a business and suggest a new technology,

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those graduates will become employed and provide many opportunities for labour and

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the rate of unemployment will be decreased. In conclusion , I strongly believe that overpopulation and economic instability remain the major reasons for the unemployment of highly skilled persons .

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, If the administration allows those graduates financial help , they can set up their own business and

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it can address

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problem .