One problem faced by almost every large city is traffic congestion. What are the causes and the solutions?

In the economic world, large companies and investors tend to pay
a huge salaries
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huge salaries
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just to attract skilled and talented
employee
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especially
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managers

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mangers
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managers

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. I strongly believe
that is
fruitful
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a fruitful

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way to increase any
company
outcomes and achieve huge profits.
First
of all, Large companies are always looking for skilled workers who can develop the business and hit the targets by deep thinking about how to improve the quality and productivity of that
company
.
Therefore
, It will definitely bring multiple profits to the
company
as well as
progressing
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the economy. So, increasing salaries and providing different benefits
such
as perks and
bonus
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to
the
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talented
mangers
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is a successful method to keep the business going up.
Furthermore
, these extra benefits may encourage ordinary people to study hard and develop their education levels so that they will be leaders of any business or
company
.
Hence
, it may show
a
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significant progress in the economy of their countries.
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, if they watch a gifted person working hard and showing high standards of productivity and
as a result
of that he gains special benefits and high wage, they will definitely be induced to work hard and do their best to progress at work. To sum up, paying
a
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much higher salaries to the skilled
mangers
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is beneficial to not only the
company
and
it’s
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development but
also
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improvement locally and globally. As well as it an effective way to make ordinary workers work and study hard
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