Write a letter to local authorities by requesting additional sports facilities for your age group in your area. Mention about the current sport facilities available What kind of additional sports facilities should be introduced *How the new sports facilities would be a help for the people in your age group

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Dear sir, My name is Zannatul Firdaus, I am a resident of khilgaon, Dhaka. I am a teacher in a kindergarten school. Today I am writing

this

letter to request you to provide some new

sports

facilities for the young people in our area. Presently, there are not many

sports

facilities in

this

town. Children play

sports

like cricket and hockey on the ground of khilgaon Government high school. There are no facilities for

sports

after office hours, where people of my age can do any

sports

. Sir, there is an open ground

to the school, which has become a dumping spot for people to throw garbage and other waste materials.

This

place

is under the city corporation of the area.

This

place

is ideal for the indoor stadium for games like badminton and lawn tennis. It is my humble request to use

this

place

for the stadium.

This

would benefit not only the young office goers but

also

the children and youth of

this

area.

Such

place

is much needed as we are leading sedentary lives, and some physical activity is imperative for all of us. Hoping for careful consideration of the suggestion. Yours faithfully, Zannatul Firdaus

Submitted by Zannatul Irin on Sun Jan 16 2022

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

200 words

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