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Some people think students should study the science of food and how to prepare it. Others think that school time should be used in learning important subjects. Discuss both views and give your opinion

#people #students #study #science #food #school #time #subjects
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Undoubtedly, schools play a significant role in an individual's
life
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. In
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 regard, some people reckon that school's curriculum should cover
food
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science
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 in order to prepare students for the future.
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, others believe that
courses
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 related to
science
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 are much more beneficial for children. As far as I am concerned,
food
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science
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 should be mandatory in institutions so as to encourage youngsters to have a healthy
life
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stylelife
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style life
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 From one point of view, the variety of
subjects
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 that should be covered during the school years is extremely high. As a consequence, some institutions have to choose
science
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 over art in order to prepare students for university admission tests or help them to find better careers.
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, schools mostly have a tight budget for
courses
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 so if the budget were to spend on the
food
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 preparation course, schools would decrease the quality of education on important
subjects
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, like math,
life
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science
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 and literacy. From another point of view, with the immense pressure coming from today's hectic
life
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, more and more people forget the importance of a healthy diet.
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, if children get acquired with the nutritional value of foods and their positive effect on the body from
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 age, they will become more cautious about their wellness in their adulthood.
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,
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 a growing population, the demand for professional chefs and experienced nutritionists are highly increased so culinary
courses
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 could help students to find their interest in
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food
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the food
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 sector and choose their future pathway.
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 but not least,
food
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science
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 can enhance the learning of other
subjects
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.
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, after spending hours on challenging
courses
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, learners can get relaxed and forget all the stress by preparing
food
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 which helps them to become more concentrated for
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next
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subjects
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.
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 but not least, with respect to the whole views mentioned above, it is essential that government allocate a huge amount of money for the
science
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 of
food
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 since it is not only lead them to a healthy lifestyle but
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 can have a positive impact on their school progress.
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