Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as the Sahara desert or the Antarctic? What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places?

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Nowadays visiting tough conditional places
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desserts or glaciers which located in Antarctica are becoming extremely popular by travellers.
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, journeys have both advantageous and disadvantageous sides.
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essay will discuss both of them and give some evidence to prove arguments.
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used to be bored really fast. Because
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future is connected deeply with their characters that might
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from their origin and upbringing methods of their parents. So,
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kind of group of
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always wants to do incredibly challenging things to get energy, joy and meaning
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their lives as well.
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: as mentioned above, one type of their source of happiness could be taken from visiting places that have got heavy conditions to visit through.
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, coming across difficulties
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from ices or gaining to escape from polar bears
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live in Antarctica, feeling challenges and winning them are their primary goals to take pleasure.
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, these challenges have a really big contrary side too.
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it can be taken some pleasure from them, they can bring huge danger to that group of nation.
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, having tours to Antarctica means that it
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adventure that people willing to be met straight away with polars in their wild conditions and be near with the death by killing by them or to roll from icebergs and stopping their heart. To sum up, visiting places that have difficult conditions, have both good and bad sides. The essential side
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people can take a huge amount of energy and relax world which has beautiful nature or with finishing their lives.
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic

IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.

Answer structure for the type of essay

  • Introduction
  • Body paragraph 1 – advantages
  • Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
  • Conclusion

Examples to start your body paragraph:

  • The main advantage is...
  • The disadvantage of this...
  • The main benefit...
  • Despite these advantages...
  • One possible drawback...

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • breathtaking landscapes
  • unique ecosystems
  • sense of adventure
  • personal growth
  • indigenous cultures
  • environmental conservation
  • climate change
  • environmental degradation
  • economically disadvantaged areas
  • physical health
  • harsh weather
  • difficult terrain
  • limited access to medical facilities
  • fragile ecosystems
  • habitat destruction
  • basic amenities
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