Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as the Sahara desert or the Antarctic? What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places?
Nowadays visiting tough conditional places
such
desserts or glaciers which located in Antarctica are becoming extremely popular by travellers. Thus
, journeys have both advantageous and disadvantageous sides. This
essay will discuss both of them and give some evidence to prove arguments.
To begin
with, some sort of community are
used to be bored really fast. Because Change the verb form
is
this
future is connected deeply with their characters that might came
from their origin and upbringing methods of their parents. So, Change the verb form
come
such
kind of group of crowd
always wants to do incredibly challenging things to get energy, joy and meaning Add an article
the crowd
of
their lives as well. Change preposition
in
For example
: as mentioned above, one type of their source of happiness could be taken from visiting places that have got heavy conditions to visit through. As a result
, coming across difficulties such
falling
from ices or gaining to escape from polar bears Change preposition
as falling
which
live in Antarctica, feeling challenges and winning them are their primary goals to take pleasure.
Correct pronoun usage
who
On the other hand
, these challenges have a really big contrary side too. Although
,
it can be taken some pleasure from them, they can bring huge danger to that group of nation. Remove the comma
apply
For instance
, having tours to Antarctica means that it clear
adventure that people willing to be met straight away with polars in their wild conditions and be near with the death by killing by them or to roll from icebergs and stopping their heart.
To sum up, visiting places that have difficult conditions, have both good and bad sides. The essential side Add an article
a clear
that
people can take a huge amount of energy and relax world which has beautiful nature or with finishing their lives.Add a missing verb
is that
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic
IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.
Answer structure for the type of essay
- Introduction
- Body paragraph 1 – advantages
- Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
- Conclusion
Examples to start your body paragraph:
- The main advantage is...
- The disadvantage of this...
- The main benefit...
- Despite these advantages...
- One possible drawback...