Mrs Barrett, an English-speaking woman who lives in your town , has advertised for someone to help her in her home for a few hours a day next summer . Write a letter to Mrs Barrett. In your letter Suggest how you could help her in her home Say why you would like to do this work Explain when you will and will not be available

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Dear Mrs Barrett , My name is Parid and I am writing

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letter to apply for the position you announced in the local newspaper

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week.I will be available to help you in your home for a couple of hours a day

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summer holidays.

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I am a

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-year university student, I could repair and maintain some devices like your laptop and printer . I think it would really advantage for you because you could reduce your stress on those devices minor or major problems .

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, I could manage to carry heavy things if you want me to do them because I am quite fit enough for those kinds of jobs as well. Even though I am a university student , I am not very well at English and I am so interesting to do the work at your accommodation because I could have a chance to learn the English language with a native speaker like you .

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, I have some appointments at my fleet every Friday evening at 5 PM so I have to leave your place before that time .Other than that time slot ,almost I am free and can help you efficiently. I hope you will consider my request and I am looking forward to hearing from you . Best regards , Parid

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

222 words

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