A friend you met last year has invited you to visit him/her in his/her country. You have never been there before and need some information before you leave. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: request advise about a gift for his/her family ask about activities and clothing in his/her country find out about the food

#friend #year #visit #country #information #request #gift #activities #food

Good evening mate how are you going,

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I'm

getting very excited about the flight to

finally

come and visit you and your

lovelly

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lovely

country,

whats

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what's

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the weather over there at the moment is it hot or cold,just so

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can work out what

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will need to bring.I w3ant to bring a little gift for your mum what would she like

hfrom

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from

here what souvenir or gift just let me know please.what do you have in the plan for the 3 weeks over their hopefully some really exciting stuff to do,all the different kinds of food make me so excited.all the different styles of food over

their

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will be a real

treatand

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treat and

treat

eye opener

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0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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1 paragraphs

113 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+

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