Water is in short supply in many countries of the world, but consumption of water by families is increasing. Why is this happening? What can be done to preserve water?

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Water
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shortage
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is a serious problem in many parts of the world,
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however
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the demand for
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by households is ascending.
This
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essay will explain the reasons for
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and suggest
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to save
water
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. On the one hand,
water
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is in short supply because of extreme weather. In
recent
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century
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, global warming
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more and more serious,
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causes a higher chance to have extreme weather.
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, there will be drought or heat
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. When temperatures rise,
water
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evaporates quickly and increases the risk of drought, which may cause
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shortage
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a shortage
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in
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.
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, the consumption of
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by families rises because of the advancement of technology. Nowadays, many new styles of household
appliance
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appliances
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require a large amount of
water
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.
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,
washing
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machine and dishwasher need to
use
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a lot of
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each time.
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, the
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used in
residential
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the residential
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area
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greatly increases.
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, there are two methods to preserve
water
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. One of the
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is educate
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citizens
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to save
water
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. The government can emphasise the seriousness of
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water
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the water
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shortage
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and educate
citizens
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some
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ways
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to prevent using too much
water
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like turning the tap off while not using it.
As a result
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,
citizens
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may try to
use
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less
water
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in order to protect the environment. Another way is to encourage the
use
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of
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water efficient
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products. The government can encourage
citizens
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to
use
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water efficient
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appliances
such
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as
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water efficient
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showerheads and washing machines, they should
also
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pay attention to
water
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efficiency labels. To conclude,
water
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shortage
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is mainly because of weather
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problems
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and the advancement of technology.
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However
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there are still some
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to tackle the problem.
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