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Water is in short supply in many countries of the world, but consumption of water by families is increasing. Why is this happening? What can be done to preserve water?

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Water
shortage
 is a serious problem in many parts of the world,
however
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 the demand for
water
 by households is ascending.
This
 essay will explain the reasons for
this
 and suggest
ways
 to save
water
. On the one hand,
water
 is in short supply because of extreme weather. In
recent
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century
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centuries
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, global warming
is become
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becomes
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 more and more serious,
this
 causes a higher chance to have extreme weather.
For instance
, there will be drought or heat
wave
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waves
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. When temperatures rise,
water
 evaporates quickly and increases the risk of drought, which may cause
shortage
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a shortage
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 in
water
.
Moreover
, the consumption of
water
 by families rises because of the advancement of technology. Nowadays, many new styles of household
appliance
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appliances
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 require a large amount of
water
.
For example
,
washing
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the washing
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 machine and dishwasher need to
use
 a lot of
water
 each time.
Therefore
, the
water
 used in
residential
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the residential
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area
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areas
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 greatly increases.
On the other hand
, there are two methods to preserve
water
. One of the
ways
is educate
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citizens
 to save
water
. The government can emphasise the seriousness of
water
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the water
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shortage
 and educate
citizens
some
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ways
 to prevent using too much
water
 like turning the tap off while not using it.
As a result
,
citizens
 may try to
use
 less
water
 in order to protect the environment. Another way is to encourage the
use
 of
water efficient
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water-efficient
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 products. The government can encourage
citizens
 to
use
water efficient
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water-efficient
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 appliances
such
 as
water efficient
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water-efficient
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 showerheads and washing machines, they should
also
 pay attention to
water
 efficiency labels. To conclude,
water
shortage
 is mainly because of weather
problem
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problems
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 and the advancement of technology.
However
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 there are still some
ways
 to tackle the problem.
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