Water is in short supply in many countries of the world, but consumption of water by families is increasing. Why is this happening? What can be done to preserve water?

Water

shortage

is a serious problem in many parts of the world,

however

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the demand for

water

by households is ascending.

This

essay will explain the reasons for

this

and suggest

ways

to save

water

. On the one hand,

water

is in short supply because of extreme weather. In

recent

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century

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, global warming

is become

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more and more serious,

this

causes a higher chance to have extreme weather.

For instance

, there will be drought or heat

wave

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waves

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. When temperatures rise,

water

evaporates quickly and increases the risk of drought, which may cause

shortage

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a shortage

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in

water

.

Moreover

, the consumption of

water

by families rises because of the advancement of technology. Nowadays, many new styles of household

appliance

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appliances

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require a large amount of

water

.

For example

,

washing

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machine and dishwasher need to

use

a lot of

water

each time.

Therefore

, the

water

used in

residential

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area

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greatly increases.

On the other hand

, there are two methods to preserve

water

. One of the

ways

is educate

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citizens

to save

water

. The government can emphasise the seriousness of

water

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shortage

and educate

citizens

some

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ways

to prevent using too much

water

like turning the tap off while not using it.

As a result

,

citizens

may try to

use

less

water

in order to protect the environment. Another way is to encourage the

use

of

water efficient

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water-efficient

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products. The government can encourage

citizens

to

use

water efficient

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water-efficient

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appliances

such

as

water efficient

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water-efficient

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showerheads and washing machines, they should

also

pay attention to

water

efficiency labels. To conclude,

water

shortage

is mainly because of weather

problem

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problems

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and the advancement of technology.

However

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there are still some

ways

to tackle the problem.