Some people say it is important to keep your home and your workplace tidy, with everything organized and in the correct place. What is your opinion about this?

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It is believed by some that it is vital for
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to make sure that everything is well organized in their home and workplace and I agree with
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. Some
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, on the one hand, believe that tidiness is not one of life's necessities and it is
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of choice. They claim that
people
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should not be required to keep tidiness in their workplaces and homes as cleanliness do not have any effect on
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who are nearby.
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, some
people
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could be sensitive to disorderliness and it affects their performance adversely.
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, cluttered papers on a person's desk in his office could be a source of distraction for his colleagues and prevent them from accomplishing their tasks completely, reducing their efficiency.
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, tidiness improves our mental and physical health significantly. It
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that by reducing clutters in our homes and workplace, the amount of dust and mild will
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significantly.
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being the case, the indoor air quality becomes fresher, reducing many lung disorders,
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as asthma.
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, a person who arranges everything in his house or workplace at regular intervals is sure that their items are available as soon as he wants.
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would reduce many stresses that many
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have to tolerate when they are looking for their needed items, which could bring them peace
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, and increase their life's quality.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • organised
  • clutter-free
  • productivity
  • mental clarity
  • efficiency
  • professionalism
  • first impressions
  • ergonomics
  • aesthetically pleasing
  • compulsive neatness
  • functional space
  • minimising distractions
  • systematic arrangement
  • time management
  • work-life balance
  • streamline
  • feng shui
  • optimal performance
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