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Some people think that people moving to a new country should accept new culture in the foriegn country. Others think that they should live as a seperate minority group with the different life style. Discuss both views and give your opinion?

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some masses believe that accepting
culture
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the culture
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 of any
country
 after migrating is a good thing
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while
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 others think they should live as
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separate
seperate
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community
. In
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 paragraphs, I will discuss both the views and
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share
 my opinion. Migrating to another
country
 for a job or any other reason and accepting
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their
culture
 put sometimes a tremendous amount of
challlenges
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challenges
 to an individual.
However
, it is important to adapt their
culture
 because it helps people to get mixed with each other easily.
Besides
 that after accepting
thier
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their
ctradition
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tradition
 and
culture
, one will not feel
hoemsick
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homesick
. Taking part in
thier
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their
the
 traditional games gives a sense of security and confidence to survive in that
country
.
Moreover
, when a person is accepting
thier
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their
culture
 the fellow countrymen will accept them and give love in return.
Secondly
, they should make
thier
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their
 own
community
 too as they should not forget
thier
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their
 own tradition.
Practicing
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 their own
culture
 and traditional things in another
country
 is not a sinful act. it
also
 helps them to show
thier
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their
culture
 to that
country
. when
thay
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they
 have
thier
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their
 own estival they can get together in that place and can wear
thier
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their
 traditional dresses which will give them a
feelong
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feeling
 of their home.
Moreover
, if
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someone
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some one
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someone
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 is having a difficult time, the minor
community
 can come together and help the one who is
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. In
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 agree with both that people should
adapt
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adopt
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another
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country
's
culture
 and at the same
time
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 they should make
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minor
community
also
.
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