More and more people are working at home rather than in the workplace. Some people say this will bring benefits to the workers and their families, others think this will bring stress to the home. Discuss both the views and give your opinion

Continuing

one

's occupation from their accommodation has become a popular trend in

this

day and age and while some, including me, take it into consideration as a positive development whose benefits can be reaped from by both family

members

and employees because of more efficiency and spending more

time

with each other, others vehemently concede that it can lead to a stressful circumstance and is significantly debilitative to the aforementioned

people

. On the

one

hand, the home has long been regarded as a peaceful and tranquil place where

people

can become relieved and let off steam after an absolutely exhausting day. In case the workload and huge burden of

one

's job are tolerated at home, the house will lose its true meaning and will no longer serve its purpose of soothing and calming its residents;

hence

, under no circumstances should workplace and dwelling be the same and there should be a fine and clear distinction between them. What cannot escape unnoticed is that

work

pressure can easily be transferred to family

members

if they are exposed to the working environment of

one

another. There are, indeed, myriads of conditions

which

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appear to be stressful and full of tension

such

as meeting deadlines or doing a massive project in

people

's careers. Had all workers opted for taking on their responsibilities at their houses, all family

members

, children

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particular, would suffer from mental disorders

such

as apprehension and anxiety.

On the other hand

, employees' efficiency can easily and immensely be alleviated when they

work

from the comfort of their house and the reasons lying behind

this

are twofold.

Firstly

, needing for commuting to the office will be eliminated, so a significant amount of

time

can be saved; and

secondly

, staying in the comfort zone is incredibly efficacious is leading to doing a job more properly, so researches show.

Additionally

,

members

of a family are able to spend more quality

time

with each other if all of them

work

in the same place. These days, the majority of

people

are leading a hectic schedule and barely do they have enough

time

on their hands to dedicate to their beloved ones and

this

phenomenon is too catastrophic to be neglected.

Therefore

, only by remote working in their houses can individuals have the opportunity of devoting invaluable and precious

time

to their families.

This

issue can strengthen the bonds and relationships, and ameliorate mutual understanding among them. To conclude, since the advent of the Internet and globalization, working remotely has prevailed in a plethora of activities and countries all around the world, and

this

matter has raised some controversies regarding whether it would be beneficial or harmful for individuals. I substantiate

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the notion that working at home can be greatly facilitative to not only family ties improvement

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but

also

to

one

's productivity level. I opine that by the end of the 21st century, an overwhelming majority of

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will have demanded their staff to

work

from their accommodations.