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Nowadays, people are spending more time away from their homes because they spend longer in their workplace. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages

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Nowadays, people are spending more
time
 away from their homes because they spend longer in their
workplace
,
this
 is the reality of today's world and going to elaborate
further
 on
this
 issue in
this
 essay. At present
workers
 have high expectations from their life and they want to get more of life,in order to achieve
this
 they try to earn as much as they can so, they end up giving a major share of
time
 to the
workplace
.
Additionally
 ,some companies had made workday of 12 hours and 6 days a week which means more than half
time
 will be at the
workplace
,plus
time
 for travel to and back to the job so there will be no actual quality
time
 for family and kids.
such
 tiring long weeks drain out the
workers
 and it will end up in
workers
 having physical and mental stress at the end of the day with no room for relaxation. quality of work is, of course, going to suffer as a staff is working on the edge of a breakdown.
such
 long work hours going to fulfil their financial needs on account of stress and compromise of family
time
 and cutting other
time
 needs. Apart from ,
,
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this
 there is ongoing training and out of station meetings which take more out of schedule
time
. In , conclusion
workers
 give the majority of their
time
 on jobs and stay at
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workplace
 for one or another reason and spend less
time
 with family and friends earning money and stressful life at the same
time
 with missing quality family
time
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • career progression
  • earning potential
  • enhanced productivity
  • skill sets
  • work-life balance
  • personal well-being
  • negatively impacting
  • increased stress
  • health issues
  • burnout
  • cardiovascular diseases
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