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Music should not be taught in schools along with other subjects such as computers and science. Do you agree or disagree? Or (How far do you agree with this statement?) (To what extent do you agree with this statement?)

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 should not be taught together with advanced
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 like
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 and
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. I disagree with
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 statement as
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 should be taught along with
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 like
science
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 and
computers
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. Studying advanced
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 daily will get stressed so
students
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 can take a break and enjoy
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students
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 who study
computers
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 and
science
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 don't have a lot of extracurricular activities the
music
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 will replace the role.
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, Studying advanced
subjects
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 daily will get stressed so
students
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 can take a break and enjoy
music
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classes
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 a student with a fresh
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 will be able to grasp more knowledge and understand well in his academics.
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, when I had
science
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classes
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 after a long session of lectures I feel tired mentally so if we get
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classes
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 where I used to sing and dance my
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 releases all the tiredness and for the
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 ,lecture my
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 is free of stress and tension so am more attentive.
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this
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 proves that
music
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classes
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 should be there in the daily school schedule so
students
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 can attend
classes
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 and take new data in
mind
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 without getting tired.
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students
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 who study
computers
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 and
science
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 don't have a lot of extracurricular activities
music
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 will replace the role.
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students
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 can spend their extra time in
music
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classes
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 and can continue playing
music
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 if they have a
passion
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 for it.
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students
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 with a
passion
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 for
music
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 have a stress free
mind
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 can achieve more knowledge and can think fast than
students
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 who don't have
music
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classes
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 where they are tired of lectures and have to continuously study.
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music
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classes
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 are essential in the daily life of a student where he can have a
passion
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 for
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 and gain something from it.
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 ,
music
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classes
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 should be there in the daily school schedule so
students
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 can attend
classes
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 and take new data in
mind
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 without getting tired.
Music
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classes
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 are essential in the daily life of a student where he can have a
passion
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 for
music
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 and gain something from it.
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 essay I have proven in schools
music
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 should be taught together with advanced
subjects
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 like
computers
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 and
science
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.
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