A friend you met last year has invited you to visit him/her in his/her country. You have never been there before and need some information before you leave. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: request advise about a gift for his/her family ask about activities and clothing in his/her country find out about the food

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Dear Raj, Hope you and Anitha are doing well. I can't believe that it's already been a year since we met and it's already time to meet you again. I love your gesture to invite me to your house. As I have never been there before, I will appreciate your suggestions on clothes and the gift that I can bring and

moreover

a little information on food style over there. As

this

is my

first

visit, I want to surprise your family with a nice gift. As you know them very well, please suggest

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buy one. I expect it's already winter in London. So, help with what type of clothes I have to carry to endure and at the same time enjoy the winter.

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but not least, it's about the food. No one knows more about my food habits than you do. Do you think I need to carry anything with me? As far as you provide me something spicy there is no problem, else I will bring homemade chilli powder. Let me know if you miss something from India, I will try my best to bring it for you. Can't wait to see you ,friend. Warm wishes, Anne

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