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you have just read an article in a national newspaper which claims that town centers in your country all look very similar to each other. you don't fully agree with this opinion. say which points in the article you agree with explain ways in which your town center is different from most other town centers offer to give guided tour of your twon to the writer of the article

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Dear Sir, I’m writing
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 letter to you express my opinions about your article in a national newspaper. I have to say that, I do not agree
your
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 opinions completely.
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 of all, I want to start with the part that I agree with you. In town centres, all
buildings
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the buildings
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 doors are grey. You wrote
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 in your article
also
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. I completely agree with your idea, because in Turkey we have to use grey
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on
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in doors
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indoors
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, according to laws.
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, in your article, you said that all buildings lengths are ten meters. I totally disagree with
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 idea because it differs from every city
center
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.
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, in Ankara, you might see twelve meters buildings.
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, If, you are suitable for
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 idea, I want you to show
some
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me some
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 city centres in my country
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 month. I am sure that I would be a good guide in your research. Please feel free to contact me. Sincerely, Ezgi Koçak
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