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Many elderly people are no longer looked after by their families but are put in care homes or nursing homes. what are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend?

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In recent years, It is becoming popular the trend that a number of elderly people are not being taken
care
 of by their families
instead
 relatives prefer to do arrangements in old age homes for their
care
.
This
 essay will illustrate the pros and cons of keeping them in senior
citizen's
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citizens'
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 shelter houses over taking
care
 of their beloved ones at their home.
To begin
 with positive, It has crucial benefits that nursing homes are equipped with advanced technology so that people can live comfortably. Most people suffer from leg movement, knee pain etc. escalator and the presence of
wheelchair
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 support them. Even the presence of trained nurses can nurture them very well since they are
professionally
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 experts for
this
.
In contrast
, families member's doesn't have free time so they are not capable to take accountability for their parents all time.
Besides
 facilitating with advanced technology and skilled nurses and
also
 provide surrounding in which they can enjoy very well due to same age. Adapting to
such
 situations
not
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 tough they share their feeling and listen to others.
Nevertheless
, It has too many advantages but
also
 has some problems trained
expert
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experts
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 doesn't
care
 about the feeling and
emotion
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 of
person
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 since they don't have any emotional relation. They just do their work and are not ready for listening to their problems and experiences. Sometimes feel very depressed due to loneliness,
this
 can put an impact on their mind and there may be the probability that if they are suffering from some normal disease cannot be cured. A healthy environment cannot be maintained without family emotion and attachment. In conclusion,
ALthough
 old age
orphanage
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having
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 technology for comfort , professional for best
care
, It is important to consider that
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they
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human
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 is
a
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social
animal
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 so they must be in their families .
This
 is because emotional attachment and bonding is a real boon for their relatives.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Professional care
  • Medical attention
  • Trained staff
  • Social interaction
  • Combat loneliness
  • Safety and security
  • Relief for families
  • Loss of autonomy
  • Emotional impact
  • Cost
  • Financial strain
  • Quality of care
  • Neglect and abuse
  • Detachment from family
  • Mental wellbeing
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