The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals, of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much.

The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals, of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much.
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The given pie charts display the proportions of three different types of nutrients that can be considered unhealthy if they are consumed too much.
Overall
, it can be clearly seen from the charts that
dinner
accounted for the highest levels of
sodium
and saturated fat,
while
snacks accounted for the highest
in
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sugar
level. Breakfast, having the most constant percentage in all types of nutrients, seems to be the least unhealthy meal where people consume 14% of
sodium
, and 16% of both
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saturated fat and added
sugar
.
On the contrary
,
dinner
has the highest average of unhealthy nutrients, up to 43% of
sodium
and 37% of saturated fat. Meanwhile, the added
sugar
consumed in
dinner
is only 23%.
In addition
, lunch has a similar pattern with
dinner
with 29% of
sodium
, 26% of saturated fat, and only 23% of added
sugar
. Turning to snacks,
while
containing only 14% and 21% of
sodium
and saturated fat consumption, there is up to 42% of added
sugar
.
It is clear that
the highest proportion of
sugar
is consumed in snacks meal.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Nutrients
  • Unhealthy
  • Daily intake
  • Percentage
  • Carbohydrates
  • Fats
  • Proteins
  • Meals
  • Balanced diet
  • Consumption
  • Excess
  • Health implications
  • Obesity
  • Diabetes
  • Heart disease
  • Convenience foods
  • Fast foods
  • Socioeconomic factors
  • Lifestyle choices
  • Healthy eating habits
  • Dietary recommendations
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