You have lost your student identification card. This has created some problems for you. Write a letter to the director of student services. In your letter advise them of your situation explain how this is affecting you request a new card

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Dear Mr Kim, My name is Dao Phuong Hoai and I am a

first

-year student in business management. I have lost my student identification

card

while I

were

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working as a volunteer in the library at school yesterday.

Therefore

, I am writing

this

letter to present my problem. The number of my ID

card

is 075193000137, which is requested by all

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exams

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when students take tests.

Although

I have asked for an

assitant

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assistant

from the manager of the library, Mr Steve, he had tried to help me but we could not find it.

However

, I have to take the final exam

Monday and it is very important for me to access the test room, so I have no time to find out my

card

. I will be

gratefull

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grateful

if you could help me to reissue a new

card

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this

weekend. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon. Thank you and best regards! PHUONG HOAI

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