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The percentage of household in owned and rented accommodation in England and whales between 1918 to 2011.

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The bar chart illustrates a change
of
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percentage
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the percentage
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 of families owning and renting houses in the UK from 1918 to 2011, particularly 10 years. Overall, according to the bars, the number of owners of houses had increased significantly over 90 year periods.
However
, the
percentage
 of renters in the house had decreased considerably during that time. In 1918, the renters were living in around seventy-seven per
cent
 of accommodations while owners were living in remaining percentages, with twenty-three per
cent
.
This
 is more than three times the
percentage
 of renters. In the years after, the difference
of
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 the
percentage
 of lessors and lessees falls gradually. By the year 1971, it was equalled, reaching fifty per
cent
.
Furthermore
, the number of lessors of the living quarters went up continuously, reaching a peak of just under seventy per
cent
.
However
, the number of lessees quarters drops continuously, hitting the bottom of over thirty per
cent
.
Finally
,
this
 trend changed Littell anew in 2011
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • ownership
  • rental accommodation
  • economic conditions
  • housing policies
  • cultural shifts
  • historical events
  • supply and demand
  • demographic shifts
  • urbanization
  • patterns
  • trends over time
  • housing market dynamics
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