With the development of social media, more and more youngsters are being allowed unsupervised access to the internet in order to meet and chat with friends which can lead to potentially dangerous situations. What solution can suggest to deal with this problem?

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or social

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playing social

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for themselves.

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light that it can make teenager getting eyes problem. According to, educate using a reason with youngsters about causes from

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enormously, and so dangerous they like to

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when crossing the road. It

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some school identify their student about dangers from playing internet.

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with their friends or hang out.

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internet

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several activities. In conclusion, a parent should

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their child for dangers of social

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by using reason.

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, teenagers should go outside to do several activities with their friends not only spend so much

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