Nowadays children watch a lot of TV and play video games. However, some people think that activities are not good for a child's mental health. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Over the
last
two or three decades, television and video
games
have been famousing
around the world, especially Correct your spelling
famous
in
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for
infants
. At present, child
spends numerous Add an article
the child
a child
times
for
playing and watching these, Change preposition
apply
therefore
, some think that this
kind of activity gives enormous
adverse effect on children's mental well-being and Add an article
an enormous
this
is not a good thing too. I strongly agree with this
statement and this
essay discusses it briefly for the following reasons.
To commence with, an entertainment-based electronic device provides tremendous toxic effects on infants
because they spend a plethora of hour
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hours
for
watching TV, Change preposition
apply
thus
, affecting mental
status Correct article usage
the mental
for
a Change preposition
of
child
. To be more elaborate, this
process can lead to addicting
of watching Replace the word
addiction
program
and can not provide attention to Add an article
the program
a program
othersides
like education, outsight game and socialising. Correct your spelling
other sides
other sites
For instance
, a recent report by the times
of India said that more than 60% of the Change the capitalization
Times
child
's mental health causes for watching television plenty of times
. Therefore
, this
kind of activity certainly, provides a toxic effect to
pre-teens.
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on
Furthermore
, playing a video
game can suffer mental health for children who are playing a plethora of minutes because some video
games
only
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are only
designs
for Wrong verb form
designed
infants
and they might be addicted to use
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using
this
, therefore
, never socialising to
others even in close family friends and relatives too. Change preposition
with
In addition
, today's video
games
are contained fully affecting mental related gamaes
like PUPG and Free Fire, these Correct your spelling
games
games
is
quite popular among the world, especially pre-teens. Change the verb form
are
For instance
, the Mumbai state of India has started a mental hospital for only the PUPG players because tons of children affect this
game. Hence
, these parts of process
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the process
affetcing
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affecting
child's
mental well-being enormously.
To conclude, television and Correct article usage
a child's
video
games
can lead to providing innumerable adverse to infants
due to numerous times
of spending these activities without taking any breaks. Therefore
, I strongly agree with this
statement in the above-mentioned details and I hope this
process is conducive to building a healthy society.Submitted by reanudeepan on
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