Nowadays children watch a lot of TV and play video games. However, some people think that activities are not good for a child's mental health. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Over the
last
two or three decades, television and
video
games
have been
famousing
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famous
around the world, especially
in
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infants
. At present,
child
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spends numerous
times
for
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playing and watching these,
therefore
, some think that
this
kind of activity gives
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adverse effect on children's mental well-being and
this
is not a good thing too. I strongly agree with
this
statement and
this
essay discusses it briefly for the following reasons. To commence with, an entertainment-based electronic device provides tremendous toxic effects on
infants
because they spend a plethora of
hour
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for
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watching TV,
thus
, affecting
mental
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the mental
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status
for
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of
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a
child
. To be more elaborate,
this
process can lead to
addicting
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of watching
program
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the program
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and can not provide attention to
othersides
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other sides
other sites
like education, outsight game and socialising.
For instance
, a recent report by the
times
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of India said that more than 60% of the
child
's mental health causes for watching television plenty of
times
.
Therefore
,
this
kind of activity certainly, provides a toxic effect
to
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pre-teens.
Furthermore
, playing a
video
game can suffer mental health for children who are playing a plethora of minutes because some
video
games
only
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designs
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for
infants
and they might be addicted to
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this
,
therefore
, never socialising
to
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others even in close family friends and relatives too.
In addition
, today's
video
games
are contained fully affecting mental related
gamaes
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games
like PUPG and Free Fire, these
games
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quite popular among the world, especially pre-teens.
For instance
, the Mumbai state of India has started a mental hospital for only the PUPG players because tons of children affect
this
game.
Hence
, these parts of
process
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affetcing
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affecting
child's
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mental well-being enormously. To conclude, television and
video
games
can lead to providing innumerable adverse to
infants
due to numerous
times
of spending these activities without taking any breaks.
Therefore
, I strongly agree with
this
statement in the above-mentioned details and I hope
this
process is conducive to building a healthy society.
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