Some people think that developed countries have a higher responsibility to combat climate change than developing countries. Other believe that all countries should have the same responsibility towards protecting the environment. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

It is argued that in the field of protecting
environment
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, it should be taken
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higher responsibilities by developed
countries
by some sort of community.
However
, others think
on the contrary
way and argue that all
countries
have to protect
environment
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with the same attention and management despite their levels of development.
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essay will discuss both views and give my own opinion below as well. On the one hand, it is somehow true that
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progressed
countries
have to protect
the
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nature
with bigger attention and power due to some reasons. Because they have enough opportunities to make it in progress if it is compared to early developing ones.
For instance
, in already advanced
countries
they have huge budgets and
also
high-developed technologies and particularly clever populations including famous and intelligent scientists and inventors
such
as Elon Musk who could invent items that can work for increasing the quality of
nature
.
On the other hand
, it should be protected the
nature
equally by all
countries
around the world and separate all duties
similarly
between them. Because we all live
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this
existing planet so have
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responsibilities to do our best to protect it.
For example
: despite having lower opportunities and strengths the nations of all
countries
furthermore
breathe from particular air and live in the same
nature
. In my opinion, in order to protect and save our
nature
in the
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conditions, all types of
countries
should be encouraged despite their developing conditions like developed, developing and others sorts.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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