Young people often copy the behaviour of adults, so all employees of VinGroup should only be allowed to eat healthy food or drink and should not encourage unhealthy habits such as smoking. Do you agree or disagree?

In the past time, many
people
believe that young
people
always like imitate all the
behavior
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behaviour
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of adults.
Consequently
, all employees of VinGroup don't be accepted to eat unhealthy
food
or
drink
and be limited to do best habits avoiding as smoking or drinking alcohol. In my opinion, I strongly agree that
almost
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most
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people
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all people
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need to eat healthy
food
or
drink
and behave gently. On the one hand, I assure
that
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you that
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eating unhealthy
food
or
drink
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drinking
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causes an unhealthy body.
For instance
,
food
containing more cholesterol is bringing to a lot of threatening diseases
such
as cardiovascular diseases, and some kind of
food
or alcoholic beverages may cause cancer diseases. In fact, we require to choose
food
that is
good for health like fish, fruits,
non- alcoholic
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non-alcoholic
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beverages,...
On the other hand
, I believe that we will become
a good men
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a good man
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when we behave gently.
For example
, many
people
don't like the man that always takes the cigarettes in his mouth or uses a lot of alcohol.
Besides
, all
people
always love the man that likes to help everyone, on working or ordinary lifestyle.
Moreover
, avoiding unhealthy habits and doing exercise regularly will bring to us a wonderful life. All things considered, I strongly believe that young men usually imitate all
behavior
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behaviour
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of senior
people
.
Then
, we need to give them only good chances to copy. That means when we consume healthy
food
or
drink
and do the best habits, they will do like that things.
As a result
, our life will have plenty of beautiful things.
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