Young people often copy the behaviour of adults, so all employees of VinGroup should only be allowed to eat healthy food or drink and should not encourage unhealthy habits such as smoking. Do you agree or disagree?
In the past time, many
people
believe that young people
always like imitate all the behavior
of adults. Change the spelling
behaviour
Consequently
, all employees of VinGroup don't be accepted to eat unhealthy food
or drink
and be limited to do best habits avoiding as smoking or drinking alcohol. In my opinion, I strongly agree that almost
Correct your spelling
most
people
need to eat healthy Correct quantifier usage
all people
food
or drink
and behave gently.
On the one hand, I assure that
eating unhealthy Correct pronoun usage
you that
food
or drink
causes an unhealthy body. Wrong verb form
drinking
For instance
, food
containing more cholesterol is bringing to a lot of threatening diseases such
as cardiovascular diseases, and some kind of food
or alcoholic beverages may cause cancer diseases. In fact, we require to choose food
that is
good for health like fish, fruits, non- alcoholic
beverages,...
Correct your spelling
non-alcoholic
On the other hand
, I believe that we will become a good men
when we behave gently. Correct the article-noun agreement
a good man
good men
For example
, many people
don't like the man that always takes the cigarettes in his mouth or uses a lot of alcohol. Besides
, all people
always love the man that likes to help everyone, on working or ordinary lifestyle. Moreover
, avoiding unhealthy habits and doing exercise regularly will bring to us a wonderful life.
All things considered, I strongly believe that young men usually imitate all behavior
of senior Change the spelling
behaviour
people
. Then
, we need to give them only good chances to copy. That means when we consume healthy food
or drink
and do the best habits, they will do like that things. As a result
, our life will have plenty of beautiful things.Submitted by nhudinhngocanh on
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