Write a letter to the hotel manager to make arrangement for hosting a party for one of your friend's. In your letter tell the manager about the reason for the party Explain what requirements you have As about the availability of facilities and the menu

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Dear Mr Jack, I am writing

this

letter to inform you of arrangements for the party which my friend is throwing on son,s 5th birthday on 11th March. To be more precise , I request you to all the arrangements perfectly done

likewise

all the games for kids and food as well.

Furthermore

, I have fixed the menu yesterday and sent it to you already via email about all the dietary requirements

accordingly

the preferences of children.

Moreover

, we have planned a few games for children so please make sure there should be enough and a safe place for adolescents to play all the games.

Additionally

, there are a few gifts we have sent to your hotel already which we will distribute on that day as returned gifts so make sure please keep them in a safe place.

Similarly

, as we know in your hotel, a variety of rides and swings for kids which undoubtedly kids will enjoy so please have assurity as it's all sanitised properly. I hope everything will be enjoyable as the way we all have planned . Thank you Do not hesitate to contact me if you require any

further

information. Yours sincerely Adam

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

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198 words

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Write a letter to the hotel manager to make arrangement for hosting a party for one of your friend's. In your letter tell the manager about the reason for the party Explain what requirements you have As about the availability of facilities and the menu

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