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Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as the Sahara desert or the Antarctic. What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places?

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The trend of travelling to explore
unsual
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unusual
 parts of the world is currently
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increasing
 these days. While some people believe it seems to be less-than-favourable
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one
. In
this
 essay, I will discuss the elements between benefits and disadvantages that could
occurs
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 in
travellers
 visiting some kind of
places
. Travelling to unfrequented destinations is
chalellnging
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challenging
 to globetrotters and full of adventure.
One
 of the most important
reason
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 is that these
places
 are
harld
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hard
hardly
 touched by tourists which makes them clean and is provides an awe-inspiring-experience.
Secondly
, as they are not many people around, it
give
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benefit
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 of being away from the daily hustle and offers a peaceful and serene environment for
travellers
 to unwind and relax.
Furthermore
,
one
 can accomplish a sense of achievement when they travel to unpopular
places
 which makes them more confident and strong. Despite the
benifits
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benefits
, it might cause some negative threats.
This
 is because, during
emergency
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situation
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situations
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,
travellers
 might be stranded alone without any help as most of there are
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uninhabited
area
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areas
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 by people.
Moreover
, not so well-known destinations lack
of
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basic facilities,
such
 as a well-being
acconmodation
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accommodation
 or medecin which make the stay quite challenging.
Besides
, Climate conditions
is
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essential
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an essential
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one
. Some
places
 like South-Polar or Amazon forest have
an extreme weather conditions
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extreme weather conditions
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, so that, which may result in ill-health.
Thus
, travelling to
places
 with
such
 difficult
condition
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 might pose grave risks. To
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summerize
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, it is evident that
travellers
 might face certain difficult situations while travelling
unexplored
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 sites.
However
, it makes them achieve success and experience wonderful destination around the world and
also
 give them new perspectives of life.
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