You are going to move out of your apartment in a English-speaking country. Your landlord is a very good person, who has assisted you a lot during your stay. Meanwhile, your friend would like to rent the flat after you. Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter, • Let your landlord know that you will be leaving • Thank you landlord for his/her help • Tel him/her about your friend

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Dear Mr Smith, I am writing

this

letter to tell you that

month I am moving out of my current apartment. Yesterday I received a job offer from Google for a full-time job. They are expecting me on the 1st of March.

This

company is accommodated in Canada, due to

this

I have to remove there before arranged dates. I want to thank you for your help during my stay in

this

flat. You are a very kind and responsible person whom I have ever known. Especially, I want to say thank you for that day, when my electricity was switched off. I could do nothing in that situation

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because I had not had the special knowledge and equipment to repair it. It could cause very big problems for me and my work,

moreover

, if I have not finished my work in time, I would have lost it.

However

, before I had started a panic, you had come and destroyed all issues. Thank you a lot for that help and for all other helps during the period, that I have been staying in

this

apartment. I hope we have become real friends and

this

relationship will be saved in the future.

In addition

, I want to say, that a friend of mine wants to rent

this

flat after me. If you gave a positive suggestion to

this

offer, she would remove here immediately after me. Please let me know your suggestion about

this

. Yours sincerely, Bim Bom

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

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Single idea per paragraph

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Lexical resource: 8.0

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Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

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