It's argued that
investment in cultural purposes is a waste of
.
of that administrations should invest funds in public
. I strongly object
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mentioned above because culture is
for
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health of the citizens but
develops the economy.
I believe that it is crucial for
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to invest
in
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public
. It has a big impact on our everyday life and how we prosper inside
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society.
Nowadays, We tend to spend less time around people. Due to the pandemic
we have been locked inside our households and advised to stay at home. During
time many of us found that lack of public life could escalate in many mental health issues
as depression or anxiety. It is
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known idea that we've been created as
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to have a chance to experience others and to create various communities. Without
we start to feel less confident and more depressed. With that in
the best way to obey psychological issues is to attend
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different
.
my friend Dereck used to be very depressed due to lock-down. Afterwards, when the restrictions has ended, he started to join many events
as art society where he has met many people in common. I was so impressed how he
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his mental issues without any
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medicants or health
.
, investing
in culture by the
is very important to develop the national economy.
is because it helps the local investors to create more events which are
running the city life and attracting the tourists from different countries.
if I don't have a chance to see the live show of William Basinski in Ireland I would go to see that event in
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which means more
left for the country where the event was placed at.
I
believe that
should invest
in public
.
is because
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police or emergency medical
are providing safety and creating our world more accessible and secure to live in.
in our modern world without proper police security and
we are in danger of
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attacks
as happened in Paris or in New York on 9/11. Where two planes hit World Trade Centre towers killing nearly 3000
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citizens.
In conclusion, I would like to disagree with the statement that cultural investments are
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waste of funds because the culture helps people to face their own mental demons.
, in my
public
should be one of the main
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to invest governmental
in to provide major security for the citizens.