Some people think that charity organizations should only offer help to people of their own country. But others believe that these organizations should give aid to people in great need wherever they live. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Individuals are divided in their opinion regarding

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non-profit organizations should provide aid to folks of their own nation or in every country around the

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. I personally believe that

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they should help people from all the countries of the

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, especially the undeveloped ones. Never before have we seen so many charity institutions around the

world

and all of them play a pivotal role in many aspects like poverty and human rights.

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happens mainly because they act in developing countries. If no interventions are taken in those nations,

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more human beings would die every day. A clear illustration of

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could be said to be that, recent research

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carried out by two prominent professors in Greece has shown that, Unicef save approximately 2 million lives from hunger every year. So I am convinced that these actions are conducive to

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this

tendency and I advocate them.

On the other hand

, there are others who tend to have a much more conservative approach in

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dilemma

. These people argue that charity organizations should focus only on helping the poorest citizens of their own country. I am sure that

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only because these people are either from poor families or are extremist nationalists.

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, in my country Greece there is an organization

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only help citizens

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Greek nationality and not refugees ( who in

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most cases are much poorer). To sum up, these

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support the view that, it is urgent that action must be taken in order to stamp out these prejudices and start to help each other regardless the nationality.

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our

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more equal and a better place for living

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the younger generation.