People often think about creating an ideal society, but most of the times fail in making this happen. What is your opinion about an ideal society How can we create an ideal society?

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Hello Diana, Thank you for helping me to purchase the chair that day. I know it's been for a while but I'm just wondering if I can request a receipt or invoice. I forgot to ask for the invoice that day.(I'm not sure if I have to provide the receipt or invoice if I need the chair repaired, just in case) Could help me with that? If it's possible, the buyer's name and address as below. Thank you very much. Buyer's name: Capital International Academy Address:1415 Woodroffe Ave. Ottawa, ON, Canada Regards, Chang

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