Recently published figures show that the wildlife population around the world has decreased by around fifty per cent over the last fifty years. What can we do to help protect the wildlife around the world?

Recently published figures show that the wildlife population around the world has decreased by around fifty per cent over the last fifty years. What can we do to help protect the wildlife around the world?
IELTS Writing Task Chart for Recently published figures show that the wildlife population around the world has decreased by around fifty per cent over the last fifty years. What can we do to help protect the wildlife around the world?
The latest news about wildlife shouts quite
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that the population has been cut in half in the past fifty years. Sadly,
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trend is easily observable in all areas and climate zones. For sure, powerful human
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could apply some force to reduce a significant part of the harm caused and potentially restore wildlife populations. Let’s think about what could be done in the first place to help protect our
planet
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neighbours. First and foremost, it’s required to preserve
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and
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of the essential needs of rare breeds and species in danger.
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includes applying high
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protection standards and
ecology
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technologies.
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, water sources are highly important for wildlife populations surviving, so industry and manufacturers should use isolated water cycles to prevent waste. With the wide availability of clean water as a base for new green areas and reforestation, it will be possible to repopulate woods with animals and birds again.
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, the power of
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human
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is quite often aimed at the lives of animals
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some pretending that it’s required for human survival. But, in most cases, that’s not exactly true because people could
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eat a lot of different greens, vegetables and nuts, replacing meat, fish and eggs.
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, purchasing new shoes made from alligator skin isn’t about basic human needs.
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eastern philosophy, all these little and big creatures have little and big souls inside, so the human soul could give a hand to reduce pain and save lives.
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way, humans should save and protect their smaller brothers with ideas of true kindness and humanity in everyone’s head. In conclusion, being the most powerful creatures on
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planet, humans have to be responsible for how
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power is used and what it causes. It should be more attractive in society to be a protector of Mother Nature and all of her children
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that’s what we should teach our kids about.

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