In many countries, the proportion of older people is steadily increasing. Does this trend have more positive or negative effects on the society? What is your opinion on that?

The bar graph depicts enrollments of
students
in thousands from five different countries in three universities. Overall, the highest
number
of
students
are from India where has the lowest
number
of
students
are from  Columbia.
Firstly
India has the highest
number
of
students
in all three Universities and the most popular is the
University
of river view with near 7,500
students
followed by the Smithtown
University
with 6000
students
and a good
University
has 5000
students
. After India Nepal has the
second
-highest
number
of enrolments which are the
University
of you with 5000
students
however
the Smith town
University
and the wood
University
both had 4000 Nepali
students
.
Secondly
, Vietnam has 2000
students
methanol
University
and almost double the
number
of
students
in the
University
of  and nearly 3,000
students
in the peace Allwood
University
moreover
when coming to Indonesian and Columbia
students
in the nation
students
were double in the MIT
University
compared to Colombian
students
and very Marshal difference was between other two universities in these two countries both stood near 1200 2000
students
in the
University
of review and 500 km
students
were installed
University
and around 1,000
students
foreign
university
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