TRAFFIC AND ACCOMMODATION PROBLEMS ARE INCREASING, AND THE GOVERNMENT SHOULD ENCOURAGE BUSINESS TO MOVE FROM CITIES TO RURAL AREAS. DO THE ADVANTAGES OUTWEIGH THE DISADVANTAGE

The government ought to motivate
business
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to be moved from urban
areas
to rural regions.
This
is needed to meet the increasing problems of traffic and accommodation in cities. It will
increase
employment opportunities and other facilities for villagers. It,
however
, will cause
pollution
and loss of natural beauty of
countryside
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. In my opinion, its detrimental effects take precedence over its benefits.
Increasing
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number of businesses in rural regions will result in rising employment chances for the native people because corporations will need to recruit workers to run their businesses.
This
will eliminate unemployment in the long run.
Secondly
,
this
will provide a variety of facilities to the villagers,
such
as recreational activities, residential societies, better educational institutions and good hospitals.
Thus
, new companies will not only
increase
jobs but
also
provide enormous amenities to the inhabitants of rural
areas
.
On the other hand
,
this
innovative approach has significant drawbacks. All kinds of
pollution
,
for example
, water, land, air and noise
pollution
, in the countryside will have
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impact on the lives of all living beings. It will have adverse effects on humans as well as on animals and plants.
Moreover
, carbon emissions will
also
increase
which involves
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global warming and rising temperature problems. Simultaneously, huge business projects will clear land by deforestation to build offices, houses or other buildings.
This
will deprive rural
areas
of the natural scenery. In conclusion,
although
arrival
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of more businesses in rural
areas
will enhance
availability
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the availability
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of jobs and facilities for the locals,
pollution
will
increase
in villages and
natural
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landscape will be lost.
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merits are overshadowed by its demerits.
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