The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevent.
The pie charts illustrate the proportion in the US
normal
meals of different kinds of nutrients, which may be unhealthy if Change preposition
of normal
over consumed
, including sodium, saturated fat, and added sugar.
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over-consumed
Overall
, it can be seen from the charts that the percentage of three types of nutrients in breakfast
is always exceeded by that in lunch
.
It is apparent that the number of sodium is the highest in dinner with 43%, followed by in
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lunch
, with the
figure being 29%. Correct article usage
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In contrast
, the rate of this
nutrient in snacks and breakfast
is the lowest at only 14% each. Moreover
, dinner and lunch
also
have the largest and the second
largest proportion of saturated fat, accounting for 37% and 26%, respectively. However
, while
the minority of saturated fat is in breakfast
with only 16%, 21% of this
nutrient is occupied by snacks.
Moving on to added sugar, snacks occupy 42% of this
nutrient, come after by
23% of dinner and 19% of Change preposition
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lunch
. On the other hand
, the least added sugar is in breakfast
with only 16%.Submitted by willy.to9938 on
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