Bringing in foreign workers to fill positions that domestic workers are unwilling to do can cause problems in the local community and should, therefore, be stopped. Do what extent do you agree with this.

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Most
people
do not want to do dangerous and dirty
jobs
,
thus
, many countries have employed foreign
workers
to fill those positions. Some
people
believe bringing
workers
from other countries can weaken local security. While I can understand
this
view, I think
this
is beneficial for the local community.   Admittedly, foreign
workers
might cause some serious problems.
To begin
with, each country has their own culture, and it is hard to adapt to other cultures.
Thus
, some foreign
workers
also
cannot be harmonized from local communities, so they can be isolated.
Consequently
,
this
kind of situation can make
people
anti-social, and
accordingly
, the
workers
' behaviour can be more violent.
Therefore
, those
workers
might not be accepted by local residents.
Furthermore
, those violent and rude acting can be led to harsh crimes
such
as murder or robbery.
Thus
, crimes from foreign
workers
exert a negative influence on local security.
However
, some social issues can be solved by foreign
workers
.
Firstly
, it is true that some hard and dirty
jobs
,
for example
, cleaners and sanitation
workers
, support the local society,
however
, those kinds of
jobs
struggle with a lack of
workers
.
Therefore
, society works well through the supply of labour force for these dirty and hardcore
jobs
.
Secondly
, the
workers
will consume many products for the household like foods and clothes, and they generally buy the goods in the local market.
Thus
, the local market economy will be improved.
Consequently
, accepting foreign
people
as
workers
will be helpful for the local community. In conclusion,
although
local dwellers might struggle with worse social security and some criminals, accepting foreign
workers
can suggest the solution to the lack of labour force and a better economy.
Therefore
, local communities have to allow
people
from other countries.
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