Meat production requires relatively more land than crop production. Some people think that as land is becoming scarce, the world’s meat consumption should be reduced. What measures could be taken to reduce the world’s meat consumption? What kinds of problems might suck measures cause?
Several representatives of modern society deem that local history, rather than worldwide history, is an essential subject for school students. Indeed, I contemplate that the overwhelming majority of adolescents should know the stages of the development of their local environment.
Therefore
, I am going to reflect on this
essay my own view of such
an issue and to provide strong arguments, which confirm my core opinion.
To sum up, I would stress that having made these points, it is true that such
an issue incurs criticism. From my perspective, it can not be denied that history must include in the curriculum of the majority of schools. Nonetheless
, governments should be concerned about this
trouble and should encourage the young generation to broaden their knowledge in events, which were in the past.Submitted by sunsistem123 on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite