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It is often said that the subjects taught in schools are too academic in orientation and that it would be more useful for children to learn about practical matters such as home management, work and interpersonal skills. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#subjects #schools #orientation #children #matters #home #management #work #skills
It is believed by many that the subjects
student
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students
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learn
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 in school are academic only so it is very much important to focus on practical
skills
 as well which can help them to gain
knowledge
 about management, work and communication
skills
. In my belief, school is not only about
to learn
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 main subjects but it is more about
to learn
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learning
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self confidence
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 and communication
skills
. There are many students who are very much keen to improve their academic
knowledge
 and
also
 believe that schools are only about to learn academic subjects because on the basis of that they will get
good
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 job in their future. For
an
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example,
people
 who are good at computer, maths, science, or biology,
they
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will get
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a well
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well packaged
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job
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jobs
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 in teaching faculty, engineering firms, laboratories and other relevant fields because they have gained more
knowledge
 about their particular field of interest.
However
, practical
skills
 and
knowledge
 is comparatively important with
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academic
knowledge
 because if
people
 are less with practical
knowledge
 they will never use their
skills
 and intelligence in their future and for that
reason
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 they will limit their goals and dreams.
People
 are more successful with their practical
skills
 along with their academic
knowledge
 rather than
the
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people
 who
are only grown
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 academically.
For instance
,
people
 who have good command over academic
knowledge
 as well as practical
skills
,
they
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can get good jobs but they can
also
 set
their
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up their
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 own business by using their entrepreneur
skills
. Apart from
that
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 they can invest in other businesses
also
 which can earn
then
 more than just doing a good packaged job. To summarise, academic
knowledge
 is very much important but practical
skills
 can be more beneficial for everyone to go beyond the limits and grow completely in
the
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life.
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