You have seen an advertisement in an Australian magazine for someone to live with a family for six months and look after their six-year-old child Write a letter to the parents.In your letter •explain why you would like the job •give details of why you would be a suitable person to employ. •say how you would spend your free time while you are in Australia.

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

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missive to let you know that I have gone through the post in the magazine and I am interested in the job that was published because I love handling kids

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,I want a long term experience for nanny course which leaves me a no excuse except to join the family which will

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act as a summer internship for me. I assert that I have gathered 3 months of my work experience in taking care of old citizens.Apart from

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,I have attained a specialised degree in nanny course from a reputed college.

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,I have experience as well as theoretical knowledge which makes me eligible for the job. Most of the time,I am engaged in some sort of social activities like spending time with the poor kids to educate them and providing feasible support to the old citizens. Give my regards to the family. I hope to hear from you soon Yours faithfully, Haman

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The Greeting

Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

Dear + name
Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

161 words

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The Greeting

Advances in technology and automation have reduced the need for manual labor. Therefore, working hours should be reduced.

The plans below show the site of an airport now and how It will look after redevelopment next year. Summarise the Information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

In many countries, plastic containers have become more common than ever and are used by many food and drink companies. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?