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In a number of countries, some people think it is necessary to spend large sum of money on constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities. Other believe the money should be spent on improving existing public transport. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

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The debate around whether assigning a tangible budget for developing railway infrastructure is better than boosting the quality of other public transportation systems has raged on recently. I, for one, believe that
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 are more common than trains.
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 essay delves into both sides of the issue and provides some logical reasons before drawing a conclusion. On the one hand, supporters of railway outline that
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 kind of transportation is so environmentally friendly since trains do not use fossil fuels
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 do not have detrimental impacts on the environment compared with
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 which carbon emission in those vehicles leads to global warming.
In addition
, trains are so comfortable, especially for long-haul distances and individuals do not squander their time in the rush hour.
Finally
, the casualty or mortality rate in railways are very low
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 merit plays a vital role in some cities
such
 as Tehran where more than 20
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people live there.
On the other hand
, the opponent of
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such
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 offer a flexible route to the passenger as they have numerous stations across the city.
Moreover
, according to a recent statistic which has been published by the New York Times approximately 60% of the world population uses
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 or
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 for their commuting. Having taken all into consideration, as far as I am concerned, the positive effects of spending money on
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 or
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 outweigh the negatives as long as the volume of demand in those is so high.
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