A restaurant has placed an advertisement for waiters and waitresses in your local newspaper. Write a letter to the restaurant, applying for the job. In your letter: explain what you are currently doing describe your suitability for this area of work say when you can attend an interview

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Dear Sir, I am writing in response to the advertisement for the job in our city newspaper. I want to express my interest in a restaurant job.

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, I am currently studying at Edmonton college so meanwhile, in my spare time I can work as well to overcome my daily expenses because right now I am not doing any work.

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, your restaurant is the right location as

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is not as far from my place which would suit me a lot if I get

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job.

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, it will be beneficial for you as in the overflow work I can be there within a few mins because my residence is 10 mins away.

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, the evening time will suit me as in the morning time I have to take my university classes, and after completion of my classes, I will come straight to your restaurant for the interview if it is fine for you. I hope to hear a positive response from you. Yours Sincerely, Swati Arora

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

168 words

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