ANIMAL SPECIES ARE BECOMING EXTINCT DUE TO HUMAN ACTIVITIES ON LAND AND IN SEA. DISCUSS THE REASONS AND SOLUTIONS

Extinction

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The extinction

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of

animals

have

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become a very concerning situation in our world. Due to the works of

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humankind

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human kind

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humankind

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, other

animals

have been affected and are either extinct or

at

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on

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the brink of extinction. In

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I will discuss two main reasons for

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and give them solutions. There are two main reasons for the eradication of animal species. The

first

one

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deforestation. As humans cut down trees and make more room for homes for the

ever growing

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population, the homes for certain

animals

such

as sloths are destroyed.

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will cause a

disturb

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in their ecosystem which will lead to extinction. Improper disposing of

garbage

is a huge threat to the

animals

living in the sea. Many countries have been known to dump their

garbage

in the sea.

This

leads to the pollution of water and

as a result

killing the

animals

living in it.

Furthermore

, disposing of plastics into the sea has become a major problem as they are

non biodegradable

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non-biodegradable

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. Turtles living in these waters inhale these plastics and eventually die. There are simple solutions to the problems discussed above.

Firstly

, the government should find alternative ways to build homes for the population, like building high rise apartments which take less space but

accomodate

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accommodate

more families.

This

way clearing forests for new houses can be reduced.

Secondly

, there should be

proper

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properly

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disposing

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disposal

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of

garbage

.

Garbage

can be made use

by

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turning them into fertilisers which can be

benefitial

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beneficial

for us. The public should be

adviced

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advised

on proper

garbage

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and a fine should be given to anyone who does not obey. In conclusion, these are the main reasons why

animals

are becoming extinct. It is our duty to preserve them and

by

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apply

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maintaining proper

garbage

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and reduction in deforestation can really save these

animals

.