You have received a letter from your bank, asking you to acknowledge receipt of a new bank card. However, the card was missing from the envelope. Write a letter to the bank's head office. In your letter: explain why you are writing express concern about the missing card ask them what they intend to do

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

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letter in order to report a problematic fact that occurred with an envelope sent to me. The package, delivered today, was supposed to have my new bank

card

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, the envelope has been compromised, as my credit

card

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is missing from it. Let me start by stating my serious concerns about

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issue, due to the fact that my personal information on the

card

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can be used without my knowledge.

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, I will not be able to perform an operation with the

card

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because it is not in my possession. Moving onto the issues which is the actions that should be made regarding

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problem, I expect an immediate approach in order to overcome the possibility of having someone using my personal information. I looking forward to hearing from you on how you intend to solve

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matter. Yours faithfully, Christina Smith

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

151 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

acknowledge receipt
compromised security
unauthorized transactions
identity theft
reissue
secure (the account)
fraudulent activity
account holder
security measures
customer service
follow-up
discrepancy
escalate the issue
trace the delivery
account security
financial risk
confidential

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