Some people are making new friends by using socializing network website and Internet chat rooms. Some people say that this is a good thing. Other people say that people should make new friends by face-to-face chat. Discuss these views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays,technology is increasing by leaps and bounds with a lot of amenities,so some individuals are creating many
friends
through social media like WhatsApp,
facebook
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and other apps,
therefore
people
think that it is
a
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best way to introduce companions.
In contrast
,Others claim that it leads to many
crisis
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,
thus
people
should meet
friends
by direct chat only.I strongly recommend that both statements are equally imperative as discussed as follows. To embark on,there are ample reasons why it is predominant.
firstly
,we can easily build relationships without the interference of family members,
this
means there is
a
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privacy.
secondly
,we do not want to go anywhere to search
relationships
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just phone is enough to create companions.
moreover
, there are
also
demerits by connecting
friends
through internet websites.
initially
,there is a chance to cheat us.because they are not trustworthy.
for instance
,according to the survey,these days,cybercrime rapidly increasing due to
the
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online friendships like they try to know every information from the online users. On another hand,some individuals tend to build new
realtionships
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relationships
through face-to-face communication.because it is very beneficial to every citizen as by seeing them directly we can understand whether
this
person
is
a
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good or bad.before making
friendship
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a friendship
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we have to see the qualities of that particular
person
.
furthermore
,we can share anything
them
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without hesitation.
for example
,recently I met a new
person
by
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through
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face-to-face communication.
additionally
,Before taking a decision I was really scared.because either she is
a
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good or bad,but after
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,somedays
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somedays
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some days
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I came to know that she is
a
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very humble as well as a benevolent
person
,
thus
people
should make
friends
through face-to-face chat. To conclude,some individuals have diverse mindsets which vary from
person
to
person
,
therefore
people
should only decide which communication is the best.
moreover
,at
this
time,
friends
are
indispensable
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an indispensable
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thing in everyone's life.because that
realtionship
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relationship
is very powerful.
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