Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organisation. Why might this be the case? What could be the disadvantages of being self-employed?

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contemporary era many individuals prefer to
work
as freelance rather than private
firm
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firms
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or organizations.
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at
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the cause
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of
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phenomenon and explore
downside
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the downside
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of being
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an entrepreneur
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.
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reason that people do not want to
work
for
organization
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is inflexible working hours. They have to
work
from 9 to 5.
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, in some companies 8 to 7 and leisure
time
ripped off by boss.
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, workers in china said that have to
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over
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time
to cover their
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.
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, in some Asian
companies
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that boss has all power and can order to
work
over
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time
without getting paid.
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as a
full
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time
job
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security.
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do not
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take much responsibility they have to just follow description works. Unlike,
self-employed
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a self-employed
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company
that
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the owner ought to know
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everything
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every thing
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if they want to handle their project well.
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, income each month is unpredictable. It is true that all net profit the owner
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will be theirs,
however
, there is a tendency to lose money as well.
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, no employment benefit,
such
as pay sick and pay
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holiday
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Also
, all financial burdens will be responsible by owners. In conclusion, the most important reason that people want to
work
on their
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business is flexible
time
.
Nevertheless
, it has many drawbacks
such
as high responsibility, unstable salary and no welfare that should be considered.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • self-employment
  • freelancing
  • entrepreneurship
  • autonomy
  • financial stability
  • work-life balance
  • financial insecurity
  • lack of support
  • resources
  • long working hours
  • uncertain income
  • job security
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